Quote of the week: "He made me a Sith Lord and named me Darth Revan. I killed for him--I turned on the Republic--but I've found redemption." - Revan talking about his past.

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'Revan' Short Story - Part 1

http://www.swtor.com/community/showthread.php?t=73491

Must read for all the die-hard KotOR fans out there. Hope you enjoy!

10 komentarzy:

  1. I really wish that Revan will get similar kind of endning. Overall, well written and nice story, kudos. Are you working on more chapters, because you finished it with "THE END". :P?

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  2. Not at the moment because I am still working on this part of the story. As I said, it is sort of a draft and there are many grammatical errors in there (and other things that could be improved). Once I finish part 1, I'll start working on part 2.

    I am glad you enjoyed it so far. Looking forward to your future feedback!

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  3. Hi, I read your fic on swtor.com forums when you posted it there while back. I loved it and you had some great ideas in there. Just wanted to ask you why you removed most of the chapter 6 because now there is a gap between chapter's 6 and 7 storyline.

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  4. I didn’t quite like how Chapter 6 turned out - was writing it in a bit of rush thus I will be revamping it. For the time being it is removed (only partly). I have everything thought out now so once I'll finish and take my time, I'll add it here and update the whole thing. Ty to everyone for support.

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  5. So, will story of part 2 happen after part 1, which we can see above? Or do you want to expand part 1 and split it on two parts??

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    1. To be honest I am not sure myself. :) At this moment in time, I did not really think about it YET. Right now I want to focus on improving and finishing off part 1. I am progressively adding bits and pieces when I find something that can be improved or that the story as a whole is in my opinion lacking.

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  6. All right this is like the best fic I ever read. Very clever use of game codex entries and you completed the gaps in the whole story very nicely cheers!!

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  7. In my personal opinion you used phrases from SW:TOR a bit to often but still enjoyed reading it, gj.

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  8. Awesome fic, though it gets a bit sad at the ending. :(

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